Action Plan
- Based on the feedback, it's clear where the main issues lie - sound mixing levels. This is very important, especially at the very beginning with the news reporter because she is an immediate narrative device, essential to the understanding of the narrative. To combat this, I shall mute the clip, which will completely remove any disruptive sounds (such as the win) and re-record a voice over that is much slower and clearer,
- Along with this, to manage the issue with syncing the dialogue for the reporter, I shall record the entire voice over, but match only a brief moment from it, instead of all of the dialogue. To elaborate, the reporter will have a very brief shot, where the dialogue matches up to her mouth movement, and then the remainder of the dialogue will continue as a sound bridge onto a black screen with a title.
- For the unnecessary background noise in the kitchen, I will similarly mute the clip and add voice overs of the reporter speaking from the TV, as narrative devices.
- To handle the issue with the narrative, I will record several voice overs with the same voice as the news reporter and place them during the kitchen scene. The voice overs are actually coming from the TV, because it is a live broadcast from the scene of the murder. This will explain why the main character's wife leaves the kitchen and appears horrified by something she has seen. She is in fact watching the live broadcast on TV and discovers that her brother in law has been murdered (the main character's brother, Stephen).
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